![]() | By: John Laffin Binding: Hardcover Publisher: Bramley Books ISBN: 1841000124 ISBN-13: 9781841000121 Released: 13 Jul 1998 RRP: Average Rating: ![]() |


His poorly concealed bias makes me chuckle every time i see the book. He rants & raves & whines about the Generals & yet doesnt source correctly when he argues against them. He seems content to sit at his desk while writing & think 'ah that makes them sound bad i'll put that in. dunno where it came from but it's still good!!'
I may consider reading his books again when he shows any ability to come up with a well rounded argument but until then, i think use as a firelighter is the best way forward for this book. Unless the fire wont accept it either of course...
Not for anyone with even a passing interest in history as it may corrupt you irreperably.

The most obvious aspect of the book that niggles is the huge pro-Australian sentiments of the author. Whenever Australians are involved they are brave, resourceful, wise etc etc!
I also liked the final chapter which just has lots of quotes from different authors about the WW1 generals.

I could write a very lengthy critique of the book in minute detail but you wouldn't read it alll (I know I wouldn't!) & anyway I don't think amazon will alllow me enough words so I'll try to sum up the book's more glaring flaws in a concise form...
- The book is incredibly badly sourced. In some chapters it borders on shameful. I have read hastily cobbled together undergraduate essays that have more comprehensive footnotes. A student submitting chapter 3 in essay form would almost certainly have had his wrists slapped.
- The entire text is incredibly subjective & riddled with unsourced assertions. The author seems to have an ill concealed bias towards Australian troops & staff officers. If taken at face value, a newcomer to WW1 history who had only read this book would be forgiven for thinking that the ANZACS won the war while Tommy Atkins put the kettle on. Dr Laffin also wheels out that hoary old chestnut about Sir John Monash being the greatest leader the BEF never had. Outside Australian military history circles it is now widely accepted that while Monash was a brilliant tactician & trainer of men, he was less capable in a strategic role & posessed nowhere near the seniority to assume command of the BEF in France. Even if he did, as a strategist he was an unknown quantity. The idea that he should have got the post is ludicrous.
- The author is deeply selective when choosing which historians to quote. Most of the most highly regarded of Great War historians are significant in their abscence. He instead quotes historians, often Antipodean historians, who have trodden similar ground before him & a number of social historians while conveiently ignoring military historians who have looked at the conflice in the MILITARY context of the time.
- The book is littered with factual inaccuracies. Some of these are obvious only to the First World War junkie (eg. Sir Ian Hamilton sailed for the Dardanelles with a copy of the 1912 handbook on the Turkish Army, not a 1905 edition) but some of them are glaring & reallly should not have been made in the first place. An example of this is that General Rawlinson is stated to have attained the rank of Field Marshal, which he never did - in a book on British generals it would be assumed that the author had looked more closely into his subjects' biographical details than this. The fact that the book is not especiallly long, coupled with the very dubious sourcing makes it hard to pass over these mistakes & helps to undermine the author's central argument.
On a final note, the author devotes a chapter of the book to quotes from soldiers condemning British generalship. Again, this is highly selective. I have spoken to vetrans who feel that the generals are a much maligned group as a whole & resent academics such as the author rubbishing men whom they never met, who had to command in conditions they have no experience of. Such quotes, while emotional, do not constitute a satisfactory closing argument.
This book does have it's place, but I'm afraid that, for me at least, it's place is as an example of how studies of the Great War should not be written. If you only ever read one study of Great War generalship, don't make it this one. If you do wish to read it, try to put the work in some sort of context within the historiography of the war & handle it with very great care indeed.

I admit to having very little knowledge of WW1 beforehand, & after reading this book I still very little. The chapter on Galllipoli is 14 pages long & the Somme 17 pages, with little info on these infamous battles.
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