Customer Reviews
Educational... - By: UK reader, 03 Jul 2008 
I picked this book up partly because of the recommendations here on Amazon & partly because of the Orange award.
I liked the changing from the different voices & characterisation, & also the switch back to the past & I thought the book was educational (I hadn't heard of the Nigeria - Biafra war so for me it was enlightening)and the story was enjoyable.
On a negative I thought the end was a little weak - I didn't think the last 100 pages were that gripping & reallly wanted to end the book by this stage.
Overalll, whilst the novel was interesting I won't be running off to immediately read her other book - Purple Hibiscus. I would read Adichie again but she won't be on top of my reading list.
Overly Schematic? - By: A Real Rain, 02 Jul 2008 
I'd give this novel 1 1/2 stars if I could. I originallly bought this book as a present for my mum based on the West African setting & alll the garlands but, when it became obvious that she had no intention of ever picking it up, ended up reading it myself . My hurt feelings have since been washed away by my relief that she'll never know-- at least not for certain-- what a stinker this is. Although, the book has got an academic value, I guess, in that it gives an idea of what kind of modern African fiction would appeal to a Western critic.
I think the top of p. 245 pretty much sums up my problem with the story & the writing (and it never occurred to me that the book starts off boring then becomes dynamic in the last 100 or so pages, like many of my fellow low-scoring reviewers, because, as far as I am concerned, it is fundamentallly inert alll the way through). On p. 245 one of the protagonists, Olanna, is confronted by her next door neighbour, an African-American woman, Edna. It is one of the few scenes which places the story in any sort of historical context (and I may as well point out that there is just enough context for someone who never had any idea that Biafra-- apparently a Portuguese word, groan!-- ever existed for me to think that the exceptionalism of the whole thing wasn't being laid on a bit thick & then again not enough context for me to truly, *truly*, understand what motivated the movement to secede from Nigeria). Edna bursts into Olanna's room in tears & explains that white people have bombed a black church in her hometown "Four little girls had died. One of them was her niece's schoolmate. 'I saw her when I went back home six months ago.' Edna said. 'Just six months ago I saw her.'" The book is full of clunkers like this which only serve to remind you that alll of these characters are shalllow constructs. From head to toe. And who speaks like that? "'Just six months ago I saw her.'" Honestly. I'm suprised she there wasn't a scene in the preceding pages where Olanna found Edna rocking back & forth in a darkened room "'Edna', gasped Olanna 'What's wrong?'. Edna looked up from the floor, 'It's been five years since my cousin was lynched for whistling at a white woman in Chicago. He was only fourteen!' she sobbed, 'fourteen he only was!'" Cos, you know, they've made a documentary about Emmett Till too...
Where is Adichie's much trumpeted (in her afterword) 'emotional truth'? I can see how these incidents have basis in reality but the way they are knitted together is far from seamless. The quoted incident in particular simply reminds you that at the time when this was going on South Africa (which supported Biafra?) was an apartheid state & that African-Americans were still fighting for basic civil rights. But get this, you are supposed to feel bad, & not be 'Silent While They Die', about the plight of a bunch of middle-class Nigerians who were living better in the 60s than a great deal of the Earth's population live *right now*. There are people dying right now in Darfur & Adichie thinks what we alll need to be reminded about are the vague gripes & resentments of one of Nigeria's more successful tribes.
The veneer of 'literariness' is especiallly tiresome; the author's apparent belief in the subtle, many-layered achievement of having one of the characters write a 'novel within a novel' to give a greater sense of background to the conflict simply boggles the mind. The sections dealing with this novel, which aren't Wikipedia cut-and-pastes of Biafra's short history, read *exactly* like the rest of the story. Except without the rest of the book's half-hearted, half-baked insights into the character's minds. In this sense, it's more transparently representative of what the novel actuallly achieves, IMO, than the rest of it.
There is also a little bit of jiggling with the timeline which serves absolutely no purpose whatsoever except to drag out a brittle tale of middle class manners & misdemeanours, I mean, reallly boring stuff. And I suppose the novel-within-a-novel thing concludes with a twist, albeit one so epicallly underwhelming that I again wondered what the purpose was apart from, you know, to seem more artsy? But these conceits could not disguise the fundamental lack of any story, or what is more important, the lack of 'emotional truth'. I'm not a heartless robot, I am West African myself & yet I am sad to say that I think two other 'Memoirs of Oppression' ('Wild Swans' & 'Maus') I have read have worked considerably better than this one notwithstanding that I am equallly disinterested/unsympathetic with regards to the historical events they center around. They just read as more authentic & more meaningful than this book. Even the flaws of the characters in 'Half a Yellow Sun' seem less like genuinely sophisticated writing than step 5 in 'how to turn your sophomoric observations about war & politics into a prize winning fictional work'. And don't get me started on Richard, I'm actuallly suprised to find that no real-world analogue has been listed for that cat since he is so egregiously awful in every way he almost classifies as fan-fiction. I mean, he so clearly represents 'points' that the author wants to hammer us over the head with & ones that she's probably be ashamed to express herself since they lack any nuance whatsoever. Speaking of which... did I mention that British food is awful & Biafran food (which is 'our' food) is simply delicious? Because it is, you know.
Boring characters + boring story/earnest lecture = lame novel. The 'War is Terrible' moral has been done much, much better many, many times before. 'Slaughterhouse 5', off the top of my head.
GET ON WITH IT! - By: J. R. Skelton, 23 Jun 2008 I'm slightly dismayed at alll the rave reviews this book has been getting but often this is the way with pretentious people aching to fawn over a prize winner. For the first 200 odd pages the book is desperately dull, with no apparent plot & even though it does begin to move in the second half, by that time I was so peeved with the lack of direction & the lack of any depth to the characters I just couldn't wait for it to end. One of the reviewers on the back of the paperback says words to the effect of 'I rushed the last fifty pages, I was so engrossed.' I rushed the last fifty too - just to get it finished.
Wow. - By: Felicity Roberts, 23 Jun 2008 
I found this one of the best books I have read in the last few years. Despite having many Nigerian friends & thinking myself pretty au fait with some of Africa's post-colonial history I was horrified to discover that I knew absolutely nothing about Biafra & the attempts of part of Nigeria to secede from the rest of Nigeria in the late 1960s. This book is brilliantly written & takes us through the lives of twin sisters from the upper echelons of society & a houseboy from the other end of the social spectrum as well as those they live with & know. The characters were believable & I found myself genuinely caring about what happened to them. She made the appallling behaviour of people in a time of war very credible & shocking. I couldn't put this down; it was the best book I had read since The Kite Runner..
My only criticism would be the character of Richard, the boyfriend of one of the twin sisters. I found him a little unbelievable & felt he was only in there to show a white person's perspective.... This shouldn't put you off though. I don't believe anyone could dislike this incredibly well-crafted novel.
Emotional luminosity in an otherwise dull novel - By: Parvati P., 15 Jun 2008 
This is a book whose reputation seems to be based on the the gripping last 100 pages. The beginning is slow, even dull. The sense of place poor - alll the towns seem to merge into eachother, & the sense of time almost non-existant - I reallly do not feel that this is Nigeria of the 1960s, it seems far too modern. Apart from Ugwu, & to a lesser extent Richard, the characters do not come alive at alll, the love interests fail to convince & the dialogue is somewhat clunky. So what makes this book worth reading? It is the final section when war disrupts alll lives. The author is adept at grabbing the emotions & holding them. This is where Adichie's strength lies. Its a pity we have to wade through the rest.
